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[Tom Henrik]

Heyas People

As this site grows, so will the amount of typos increase. We try our best to fix any errors before launching an update, but there will be times when we miss some typos, faulty links and so on...

So if you spot anything that is wrong, please use this topic to inform us.

Thank you

Edited by Tom Henrik, 14 October 2005 - 07:46 PM.

[BeefontheBone]

How's this: "Please us this topic to inform us."

[Tom Henrik]

D'oh!

*fixes*

Edit:
Would you believe I meant to do that?..

Edited by Tom Henrik, 14 October 2005 - 07:47 PM.

[BeefontheBone]

Not in a million years

[DeathDude]

Nah unfortuantely I can't either.

[A. J. Raffles]

Not really a typo, but confusing two homophone words:

GunZ review said:

Basically, there are 4 servers and more often than not there full up

That second "there" should be a "they're", methinks.

[Tom Henrik]

Fixed. I also fixed the slight grammar error with using "Full Up", and fixed a "there" in the following sentence.

It now looks like this:

"Basically, there are 4 servers and more often than not they are filled up. If they're not all packed with players..."

[BeefontheBone]

Ah, but I've now fixed it to something else I also edited the Requirements so they're not longer than the review any more

[A. J. Raffles]

Abducted - 10 Minutes review said:

the story bring you in right away

brings

the same review said:

Graphics in the game are okay, they are nothing special, but they are do the job effectively

There's a unnecessary "are" in there.

same review said:

Like in the beginning of the game, the color of your wallet was hard to make out as the interface was in black and so was your wallet.

Odd change of tense. Simple present would make more sense here. (The following sentence has simple past as well.)

same review said:

Note near the end of the game I finally noticed that each action has a small little tiny white pixel.

Looks like there's a colon missing after "note".

same review said:

That is what the key to interacting with an object properly, glad to find it but still may be frustrating for gamers at times, especially with the time limit going on.

I think somebody was rewriting this sentence a bit too often and accidentally got rid of the subject.

same review said:

Still though the game does an effective job of putting you into the role of a detective as you try to save your daughter and foil the terrorists, all the while picking up the clues and doing it in under 10 minutes, which made the experience much more real.

Very long sentence. I'd suggest at least throwing in a couple of commas (before and after "though" and one more after "detective") and changing that "made" to "makes".

same review said:

So if your looking for an adventure game with action

you're

Sorry, DeathDude!

[DeathDude]

Hehe it's alright Raffles, thanks for correcting my poor grammar , yes I admit it, my grammar is not up to par, my english profs have been saying that for years, but what do they know. Content is the key I say in papers, not looking where I missed a comma and docking me marks bad experiences let's just say I've had with that sort of thing. *end rant*

[BeefontheBone]

Well, the idea here is to publically humiliate you until it improves

[DeathDude]

Your right it's a good motivational tool for me or others to improve. Thanks it will help.  

[Juni Ori]

DeathDude, on Oct 17 2005, 08:56 PM, said:

Your right it's a good motivational tool for me or others to improve. Thanks it will help. 

"You're right, it's a good motivational tool for me or others to improve. Thanks, it will help. "

...you meant?

[DeathDude]

Alright alright enough picking on my grammar, nothing to see move along.

[Qbix]

Llamatron:
his game's simply brilliant, and you can't afford it not to play it.

That it sounds a bit odd